Comment by Hosono

MANGA Plus by SHUEISHA Editor-in-Chief

The art is fantastic. I feel the character expressions and action movements are solidly drawn.
However, one piece of advice: you need more wide shots. Often, action comes from outside the frame without follow-up, so it's unclear what actually happened (e.g., being attacked from off-panel without seeing the attacker). If this were a deliberate direction choice, it would be fine, but it looks like a lack of visual storytelling skills. It's a pity!
The characters and drama are well-crafted; I look forward to the rest.