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MANGA Plus
by SHUEISHA
100,000 JPY + Publication on MANGA Plus by SHUEISHA
30,000 JPY
Comment by Hosono
MANGA Plus by SHUEISHA Editor-in-Chief
The story is generally well structured, but several elements feel underdeveloped, such as the role of Midnight and the inventor aspect.
The artwork gives the impression that the creator’s ambition exceeds their current technical execution. That said, there is clear potential for growth, and I look forward to seeing how the work develops.
Comment by Hosono
MANGA Plus by SHUEISHA Editor-in-Chief
The artwork has a strong sense of impact, and the characters’ expressions convey a compelling sense of drama.
However, the characters' emotions are so volatile and they rarely try to understand each other, making it hard to empathize with them.
Additionally, it is unclear what they are fighting for and what abilities they are using in battle, which makes the narrative harder to follow.