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MANGA Plus
by SHUEISHA
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Comment by Hosono
MANGA Plus by SHUEISHA Editor-in-Chief
The story is straightforward, but the protagonist is highly likable. However, the antagonist is given too much page time at the beginning, so it would be better to switch to the protagonist earlier or revise the overall structure.
Comment by Hosono
MANGA Plus by SHUEISHA Editor-in-Chief
While some aspects of the setting remain unclear, the protagonist's character is well established, making the reader interested in what happens next. The action scenes are engaging, with creative choreography and movement, and the character designs, including those of the antagonists, are strong.
However, it feels like a missed opportunity that the protagonist's face remains hidden for much of the story. Similarly, the reveal of the arm gimmick is handled rather casually, when it could have been presented in a more impactful and visually striking way.